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Revision 5 . . 2005-5-15 3:08 pm by DavidJennings [Added comment on repeat rhyme scheme]
Revision 4 . . 2004-9-9 12:20 am by DavidJennings [Added notes from LD Beghtol]

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'You won't be hearing from me anymore

cause I can't see through my tears anymore

If it takes years to be any more than a jellyfish'

Rhyming by repeating the same word is generally regarded as fairly lame (except in the context of blue songs that repeat whole lines), so Stephin is making a songwriting joke by repeating "any more" not once but twice. It's a crime, indeed.